This is the first draft of my media video, I decided to make a quick draft and then get some feedback so that if the idea diddnt wqork i would have enough time to refilm.
Feedback
Good: The graduate progression of the villans presence is effective as it creates suspence, I think that by adding the music we discussed it will be more effective. Also the sound of the music box at the beginning is effective.Bad: The end scene cuts too soon, and some of the sequenses (static) need fixing. The 2nd scene (music box jess) seems too short compared with the other shots.
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