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Kieran:

The shading effects on the eye are very good at creating a theme of horror and are very effective at disturbing the viewer which instantaneously allows the viewer to identify this poster with the horror film genre. The tag-line is very effective at reinforcing the disturbance which is portrayed by the eyes themselves.

Not a big fan of the vengeance bit. Kind of looks like jam.

Sort out the line near the hairline, and hair strands bottom left.

Yasmin:

The blood effect and shading around the eye is very realistic and creates the intended feeling of horror. Small details such as blood/dirt around the fingers also intensify this feeling. The choice of black background is ideal and complements the shading above the eye. You could try burning the edges of the clockwork just to blend it into the outer rim of the eye. Overall the choice of imagery is very fitting and compelling to look at. However, I would change the font as the white/red contrast is more distracting to the eye. Perhaps you could also extend the canvas to the left and have all of the font centre aligned rather than staggered. Just some alterations to the font are required but the photo is perfect J