Film draft 2 (music)

Feedback
Alex - The acceleration of the music builds with the acceleration of the footage. I like the text as it gives you a feel as to what the film is about and really draws you in. It also now feels less fragmented and flows better because you extended the music box scene. However you need to fix the spelling in the website and maybe use a different font.

Kiera - The genre of the film is clear and overall it is a good trailer, the narrative is clear without revealing too much of the plot however i dont like the use of the static.